2d:null 2e:["$","title",null,{"children":"SM3809_A10 | ychsu6 | Observable"}] 33:T73a,md` This is the 2nd version of my Twine + RiTa work, the one demonstrated on 1st of April in class. #### To be done schedule Will finished fixing some structure/narrative issues, some techinal parts by 4th April and done adding additional audio & images by 7th April. Will done the website by 11th April (And will move this 2nd version to Assignment 9 notebook and upload the version 3 here.) In this second version, more interesting functoin in Twine has been explored. This version is very much inspired by the TV series "The Good PLace". Although the TV series itself focus more on the consept of After Life, I find the robot character Janet rather more interesting. Therefore, in this version, I played with some topics related to human-machine relationship and some issues happening between human themselves (gender/hatred...etc.) and stuff happening in individual human's brain. #### To be improved:

##### Narrative:

The messy 1st, 2nd, 3rd point of view is too confusing.

More comprehensive: Fix the narrative structure (some part is missing, and the twist should be more smooth).

Fix the interactive part: too many one buttom part (forcing reader) .

More careful about the timing method between lines or when to use the typewritter effect (the horizontal dimension of narative).

##### Techinical:

Add more parts that had RiScript contained for more unpredictable effect.

Play with the special function in Twine that can remember users' previous actions/decisoins and to further influence the storytelling (and to cross out the selection that the user has been through).

##### Additional:

Add audio/images to improve the "thickness" of narrative (the vertical dimension of narative).

##### Final polishing:

Website on GitHub

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  this.weights[i] += error x this.learnRate x inputs[i];// times the input to get the moving direction

My comments here describe that it is because we time the “input[i]” to get the moving direction for the training. But I think I still don’t really understand why we need input[i] and how did it get the changing direction by it. From the previous steps, we already know that error will be 1 or 0 or -1, based on “error = label - guess”, didn’t the changing error already somehow gives it a direction?

\nHere is my redo work in p5js web editor with several comments:\n

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