A little experiment and... I feel that I can improve my work of last week from multiple aspects: The layout: how to make it easier for people to read, but at the same time a bit disturbing and not too comfortable. The dynamic (swapping of words): how to make more sense with the dynamic; how to make it more relavant to the content. The content of the poem: long-term variation and ...? ...but I underestimated the difficulty of implementing those ideas">